Quick Edit I Made

[Gingerninjaperson]

Hello! Just wanted some opinions on a quick (keyword quick) edit I made. It's unpolished, and not very good, I kinda threw it together in a few minutes. I'm thinking of making a 2-3 minute montage like this (With much more detail put into it) but I wanted your guy's opinions on this. Again, made it really quickly, and some of the transitions are slightly off. :/
Also, I uploaded it to tinypic or some weird website like that, cuz of copyrighted music. The website compressed the audio quality so it sounds terrible, won't normally sound like that. :P Only my second edit ever (First was something similar), so keep that in mind. Any criticism or comments are appreciated! :D
http://goo.gl/RaJYRc

[VladVP]

Hhmm... maybe some music with a better rhythm next time, but you're on the right path.

[extra]

yea, it looks nice so far.
Good luck with it.

[Gingerninjaperson]

Thanks!

[Eimis]

In my opinion, there were too many transitions and flashes, but otherwise it's ok.

[Ninja_pig_pro]

[Gingerninjaperson]

Yeah, the effects were a bit much, mainly for testing purposes. I'll lessen the effects if I do another one.