YouTube feed back?

[Jdrew]

So I have started a new series called the block. It is a weekly vlog series where I talk about anything gaming related. I want to hear some feed back from you guys though. So tell me: How can I improve? What do I need to work on? I suggest you watch it on YouTube. The embedded video isn't the same.

[EldredChandler]

*Balance
As serious constructive criticism, make sure everything is spelled correctly before uploading.

Also buy or 'buy' Bandicam so that watermark isn't there.

[Jdrew]

What about the video itself? Did I talk about a good subject? Did I make sense?

[Ninja_pig_pro]

[EldredChandler]

I also think instead of using gameplay, download footage from what your talking about.

It's much easier for him to film the game hes going to talk about and just edit that, then search for random clips that pertain to his topic, and having to make sure it's ok to take them and what-not.

What type of mic do you use? Headset or Desk? If you use a desk, I'd recommend getting a pop-filter so that static-y noise that happens when you make a 'p' sound doesn't get picked up by the mic.

Also, I'm a fan of post commentary, which is where you record the gameplay with no voice/commentary. Then, once you get the footage you need, you write out what you want to say, almost like a script, so you can make sure all your points get across smoothly, and theres no awkward moments where you have to think about what to say.

[Jdrew]

I use a head set. I guess I will try with the post commentary but I have not done it before so I do not know how it will turn out.

[VladVP]

My number one tip before you go any further: Either get a better mic, or take it a bit away from the mouth when you speak.

The topic is a bit... general. Something that most people know about. I can't say it didn't make sense though.