Build and Shoot

My most favorite custom rifle by yours truly.
Custom AW308 Dark Earth Rifle
Download Link: http://www.mediafire.com/?ek1yl25pq3x6q0j

Looks pretty good, although the 3 voxels on the end of the barrel isn't necessary but it's k. Also I don't see the grip, how's the deuce gonne hold it? The stock could be a bit longer & isn't as accurate as the pictures I've seen & the magazine seems a bit long, cut it down by 1 voxel line. I guess that's pretty much it, this is me being 'straight forward'. but anyways good attempt

lol, ghost. thank you for allowing me to recognize the weapons true potential by correcting the errors that i have made! and i love the constructive crticism!d

and here is the corrected version, for you ghost: