Build and Shoot

welcome to my armory! here you will find great mods, all hand crafted and detailed by me!
First up we have the basic tools pack, with a katana, a custom sniper rifle and an Uzi
Download:- http://www.mediafire.com/?et4a7wjs7e9br8w
this is my first pack, so be gentle
pics:-
avenger(the sniper):-



Scope


Uzi:-


Sight (sucks, I know)


Katana:-



TAR-21 w/Grenade Launcher (requested by FloptimusPrime)
Dowload Link:- http://www.mediafire.com/?bzwlmxdnk7q12cg
Images:-
Real Gun

My gun

First person

Third person

Iron sights

NOTE:- Grenade Launcher does not shoot grenades (obviously)

The best yet, the space patrol pack!
Features:-
2 smgs
1 semi
1 exclusive bullet model
3 great sights
First up an smg the Plasma REV

sights


next, another smg, the Valkyrie

sights

And now, the semi! the Scout Rifle

sights

The bullet

OK, to be honest:

1)The sights look terrible.
2)The UZI is clearly not in the player's hands. Its floating against it's chest.

(Trying not to be harsh.)

But I would be interested to see your attempt at a GTAR-21 (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/IMI_Tavor_TAR-21#Variants) With Grenade launcher please.

Not to be harsh but the guns are not equally in the body and it's ok. I made that mistake in my first time. Keep it up though and don't stop, take this as a test to pass the class.

Well, they could use some improvment, but I don't want to be harsh. But anyways, these are among your first, so you will get better.

I'm sorry to have to say this but the Plasma REV looks like a stick and the sights are pretty bad.
Other than that, considering those are your first mods they are not thaaat bad, I've seen much worse around here. The TAR-21 looks nice actually, but it should be 3-voxel thick instead of 1-voxel thick. The positioning of the guns is also wrong, the UZI looks like its trying to eat that player's face in third person and the Tavor could be moved back a little.

Can I edit your TAR-21? If not, it's fine.

um the uzi is too close and the TAR-21 is too far

Ichiboi111 wrote:

Can I edit your TAR-21? If not, it's fine.

Yup!

please make both of these three snipers and this Aug. working on a personal kit, if it gets released for public I will do my best to remember creds. for the one with 2 barrels, please dont make the handle look retarded as it does in the pic, also try to extend the stock a little.THX







Admiral Adam Soldier of the Jew-Gaming-Crew a multi-game military

Plz make a TeamFortress2 Widowmaker, for the shotgun. Please !