My first map: "trees"

Lelue · Unread post by **Lelue** » Thu May 23, 2013 7:25 pm

It`s a new map i invented with the help of v`3 :3 thanks for that. its a random map where green and blue have 3 "hills"/"statues" in their base. The map is surounded by a few islands and an bigger island. (they arent connected to each other island). in the middle it looks like 2 sees, but they aren`t. So okay. Please dont be too harsh, as i said: It`s my fisrt map and i wanted to try out how everything works (blockman/voxed).

Picture of it:

Here is the file:
http://www.mediafire.com/download/10kcd ... /Trees.vxl

I would be happy if you reply what was good and what wasnt...

Ps: I will work on the Islandproblem as soon as i have my own server :P

Ballistic · Unread post by **Ballistic** » Thu May 23, 2013 7:40 pm

The islands on the side are a good idea, I like them. I bet the matches on this map will be intense :D
Good job Lelue

Vengeance · Unread post by **Vengeance** » Thu May 23, 2013 8:37 pm

It looks good from what I can see. Good job for your first!

Venator · Unread post by **Venator** » Thu May 23, 2013 9:09 pm

Seems really good.
9/10

Jdrew · Unread post by **Jdrew** » Thu May 23, 2013 9:30 pm

Seems really good, my first map isn't as good as this. You have alot of potential to become a great mapper.

Sennar · Unread post by **Sennar** » Fri May 24, 2013 12:12 am

K want some actual feedback? No? Very good lets' go.

Looks beautiful although a bit like pinpoint (not a bad thing).

I love the 3 coloured blobs in each spawn. (wonderful for building structures). Maybe make them rounder just for them looks.

I do not like the islands on the sides too much as they will definitely become camper spots. Also you might want to lower them a bit.
;)

Otherwise this looks like a lovely map to play clanmatches on :D

Handles · Unread post by **Handles** » Fri May 24, 2013 1:43 am

I recommend thatyou havethe cliffs sloping tothe water. But other wise good job!

MrHaaax · Unread post by **MrHaaax** » Fri May 24, 2013 4:56 am

Great job Lelue.

Lelue · Unread post by **Lelue** » Fri May 24, 2013 11:54 am

thank you all. In the following weeks i will try to add small bridges between the islands ;)

mylesd98 · Unread post by **mylesd98** » Fri May 24, 2013 3:36 pm

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Leif_The_Head · Unread post by **Leif_The_Head** » Fri May 24, 2013 4:28 pm

"Hourglass" would be a better name for this^^
Those spawn "hills" should be not that straight at the edges, so you can get to the bottom living and not falling to death.

Lostmotel · Unread post by **Lostmotel** » Sun May 26, 2013 6:18 pm

good job, lelue
I like how you used the lighten brush

TB_ · Unread post by **TB_** » Fri Jun 07, 2013 9:19 am

Looks really nice, some more pictures would be handy though!

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