Build and Shoot

Hello! Just wanted some opinions on a quick (keyword quick) edit I made. It's unpolished, and not very good, I kinda threw it together in a few minutes. I'm thinking of making a 2-3 minute montage like this (With much more detail put into it) but I wanted your guy's opinions on this. Again, made it really quickly, and some of the transitions are slightly off. :/
Also, I uploaded it to tinypic or some weird website like that, cuz of copyrighted music. The website compressed the audio quality so it sounds terrible, won't normally sound like that. :P Only my second edit ever (First was something similar), so keep that in mind. Any criticism or comments are appreciated! :D
http://goo.gl/RaJYRc

Hhmm... maybe some music with a better rhythm next time, but you're on the right path.

yea, it looks nice so far.
Good luck with it.

Thanks!

In my opinion, there were too many transitions and flashes, but otherwise it's ok.

Yeah, the effects were a bit much, mainly for testing purposes. I'll lessen the effects if I do another one.