[AW]AlphaWolfs Looking for members!

[Flitzey]

Hey Guys!
I make a clan because I like ace of spades very much!
And I'm looking for people who want to join this clan.
It's for everyone! From good players to not so good players everyone is welcome!
I can speak english and german ,so german People can join this clan too!
You are looking for a clan?Come to us [AW] AlphaWolfs!

~RULES~
Do not be racist!
Do not be aggressive!
Bullying is not welcome!
hacker / cheater aimboter etc. are not welcome!
Do not be a griefer!
Make no team kills!
etc.

So Join NOW!
PS:I am a german lets Player: FlitziePlays
PSS: Skype: Flitzey
So Join NOW!

And be a AlphaWolf now!

[Jdrew]

1. You have the whole fist paragraph unlined which just makes you look immature
2. You have barely any information on as to why people should join
3. Your English needs to be a bit better as most of it doesn't really make sense, maybe you should try using Google translate to have it look better without doing all the work

Its cool you want to make your own clan and all but you really need to improve your thread first. How are people supposed to join? You don't tell them how to join. You also don't have a members list so people don't if this clan is big or only has one member. You also don't seem to have an IRC or even a basic communication system set up which will limit your clan to just a thread til you have everything set up which should have been done before the thread was made. If you are going to make the changes then just edit this thread, do not make a new one.