Build and Shoot

So I've been making videos for a while now and I want to know how I am doing with commentating. Give me tips on how to improve and constructive criticism. As of always, remember to like the video and subscribe to see more.

cunt

Pedroh wrote:

cunt

Why do you keep saying that to me? All I asked for was constructive criticism.

Xenon wrote:

Pedroh wrote:

cunt

Why do you keep saying that to me? All I asked for was constructive criticism.

slut, jk yeah better than you other latenight commentaries. except youre not even being yourself in the video youre being a gayboy fag. in mumble you sound like a sick ghetto boy, i perfer you that way(imo)

Pedroh wrote:

Xenon wrote:

Pedroh wrote:

cunt

Why do you keep saying that to me? All I asked for was constructive criticism.

slut, jk yeah better than you other latenight commentaries. except youre not even being yourself in the video youre being a gayboy fag. in mumble you sound like a sick ghetto boy, i perfer you that way(imo)

I am a ghetto boy though. (White and not sick though) I go to a ghetto school and get a shitty education. Play for the school soccer team aka all the white kids at the school. I tried to be more say-- positive and enthusiastic.

Xenon wrote:

Pedroh wrote:

Xenon wrote:

Pedroh wrote:

cunt

Why do you keep saying that to me? All I asked for was constructive criticism.

slut, jk yeah better than you other latenight commentaries. except youre not even being yourself in the video youre being a gayboy fag. in mumble you sound like a sick ghetto boy, i perfer you that way(imo)

I am a ghetto boy though. (White and not sick though) I go to a ghetto school and get a shitty education. Play for the school soccer team aka all the white kids at the school. I tried to be more say-- positive and enthusiastic.

k if thats what you were going for, you did good

Lol, big boi.