Build and Shoot

Hey, all.
So, I guess I'm trying to get into YouTube. Right now I only have a few videos, but more are on the way for sure!
I could do with some feedback, though... How is my voice? How's the editing? Is the music too loud? Is it entertaining enough? Informative enough? Etc.,

I've done a few RuneScape videos so far, and a single OpenSpades video. I'd appreciate if you could check them out and give me some advice.
Thanks in advance!

I like the OpenSpades video. Very well edited.

Jagex.... Get that out of here...

I like the OpenSpades one a lot.

Your OpenSpades video is great. Nice background music, we can hear you well, and it's very well put together and has a great overview of the two games.

good work! very enjoyable